Monday, April 28, 2014

Publishes choise

The blog I chose to pick that was the most strongest or most distinct voice is probably the blog that shows the character of Montag.The specific words i used to showcase my personality as a writer  was like the word of "regret" or "remorse" and these words can create a better picture  to whoever is reading this or my blogs.

In my blog post I had some exapmles of syntax in my blog especially commas. In my second  paragraph of the Montag Blog there is a sentence where I used a comma and this makes the sentense more  intresting and makes it a run-on sentence and it will make the reader more amused."In this quote it shows how montag expresses his opoinion on whats messed up in the soiciety, like for example when he watched that lady burn in the house." There is an expamle of diction in my blog post and the diction inmy blog post shows in a informational way of informing the reader about the character of Montag."But he has a different view on the society he his in and he thinks they should not burn the books and change the way they they live in and how they do things."

1 comment:

  1. Arrrrrr! Get it? I'm a pirate. I concur that you had good syntax. Good blog, better luck next time. Scurvy. Booty. Arrrrgh. I'm bored.

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